Hello everyone!
I need a quick revision on this text please:
Edmond, my 3-year-old son, is playing on the beach during a spectacular September afternoon. We were blessed all day long with a gorgeous warm light that felt like the sunset. Coming up North has been yet the best decision we made for our family, our boys are growing up loving the outdoors over new fancy toys and it means the world for us. Therefore, with their help, we are starting again to see the beauty in everything that surrounds us and, as a photographer, it’s the inspiration I was craving for!
Does it look right? Grammarly says there is 4 additional writing issues…but I can’t afford premium!
Thank you!
