Hi guys~ I am going to apply KGSP for Master’s study. This is my personal statement for the scholarship. Well, English is not my mother tongue so I need you guys’ help to correct my grammar mistakes. It would be very helpful if you guys give me some suggestions and comments. Thanks!!!
o Motivations with which you apply for this program
o Your education and work experience in relation to the KGSP
o Reason for studying in Korea
o Any other aspects of your background and interests which may help us evaluate your aptitude and passion for graduate study or research.
(KGSP PERSONAL STATEMENT)
It has been a long time waiting for this amazing opportunity. I have had a big dream to gain my bachelor degree in Korea, and the Korean Government Scholarship Program (KGSP) will be the bridge for me to achieve this dream. The main reasons that motivated me to apply for the KGSP. First of all, Korea is well-known for its high quality education, especially in Technology field. Electronics is the field I have always been Attract in. Since I was young, I began to know some kinds of technical devices and tools. Many of them are made by Korean companies such as SAMSUNG, LG, HYUNDAI, KIA, SK, etc. This made me think how advanced Korean technologies’ education is.South Korea best every country on the planet in education and best environment to study Technology.
My interest in science dates back to my years in high school, where I excelled in physics, and math. When I was a senior, I took Engineering course in 1st year at a college then I choose to attain knowledge landed me up in Diploma of Associate engineer (DAE) at Peshawar institute of Technology (PIT) where I took Electronics. Where I got the opportunity to study at a great depth. My keen interest in this direction was another positive point, which gave me an edge above other students. I excelled it with A Grade and took 2nd place in class.
It seemed only logical that I pursue a career in electronics engineering.
The main outlet for my passion for electronics has come out when I Join Mobile shop where I work and enhance my skills and practical
When I began my undergraduate career, I had the opportunity to be exposed to the full range of engineering courses, all of which tended to reinforce and solidify my intense interest in engineering. I’ve also had the opportunity to study a number of subjects in the humanities and they have been both enjoyable and enlightening, providing me with a new and different perspective on the world in which we live. my love of Electronics started in University. We had a young and enthusiastic teacher. Who took us on field trips and visits. He made sure we did as much practical work as was feasible and demonstrated experiments that we hadn’t the equipment or time to do ourselves. He also encouraged us to read
After graduating with a first class degree from, Iqra National University, I felt I should gain some practical experience working in a research environment to gain first-hand knowledge of what the life of a research scientist entails. I have loved every minute of my work: especially the opportunity to participate in cutting-edge projects and discuss ideas with seniors.
As the school plays a stepping stone in every child’s life, it even encouraged me to do some other extracurricular activities other than academics; it helped me to become a better and an extrovert child. This encouragement and involvement helped me to have an open and a positive attitude in life. I actively participated in Sports like INTER SCHOOL CRICKET COMPETITIONS also leads Cricket team UNIVERSITY
Eventually, I hope the information I have described above are clear and enough for my personal statement. I am looking forward to getting your valuable interest.
Your esteemed institution has a peerless reputation for emphasizing practical knowledge and innovation for its students and promotes an excellent industry-institute relationship. I am confident that your institution will help me contribute positively to the ever-changing industrial scenario. I look up graduate studies in the department of Electronic and communication engineering & Related Subjects at your esteemed institution as an opening to develop my skills and give a direction to my career & to fulfill my core ideas.
This sounds like a fantastic opportunity! Here are a few pointers for your personal statement. Note that this forum is not really suitable for a full edit of your statement, but hopefully some of these notes can help improve what you have already written:
Personal statements are not letters. They are, in short, an essay to an admissions committee who takes it into account with the rest of your application. You should not open your statement with “Dear professor”. Just jump right in!
Opening sentence: I have been waiting a long time…
The sentence “The main reasons that motivated me to apply for the KGSP.” Is not complete (there is no verb)! You should say, “The main reasons that… are 1, 2, and 3.
Be careful of your uppercase and lowercase letters: words like technology, attract, and electronics should not be capitalized unless they are at the beginning of a sentence.
Company names should not be written entirely in capital letters (Samsung, not SAMSUNG)
Delete these sentences: “I hope the information I have described above are clear and enough for my personal statement. I am looking forward to getting your valuable interest.” This is true of all personal statements, so you do not need to reiterate this.
Try to stay away from symbols like (&). Instead, type the word “and”.